I'm left surrounded in darkness,
But I refuse to be swallowed by it,
My loneliness like the night air,
Invisible to the eye obvious to the touch,
In its cold uncomfortableness,
Even though I have seen its darkest form, the deceit,
Nothing else could taste this warm or feel this sweet.














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I really like the last two lines - they conclude it nicely
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you so emoooo xDDD
but its kaay 8D
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"Nothing else could taste this warm or feel this sweet."
It's suppose to be
"feel this warm or taste this sweet."
Hahaha wow I'm so senseless.
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You're welcome ^__^
Oh yeah, heh, I never noticed it x3
Though maybe you could have something taste warm... but not feel sweet
Haha.
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Yeah, I guess you're right
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Lol xD
Well, i guess, after all, you weren't exactly wrong then with your last two lines x3
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