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I'm left surrounded in darkness,
But I refuse to be swallowed by it,
My loneliness like the night air,
Invisible to the eye obvious to the touch,
In its cold uncomfortableness,
Even though I have seen its darkest form, the deceit,
Nothing else could taste this warm or feel this sweet.
©2008-2009 ~Mr-Viet
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Na muuuuuuu =)

explain that then I shall give you a hug x)

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I really like the last two lines - they conclude it nicely :)

:iconmr-viet:
Thank you =)

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*bops*
you so emoooo xDDD
but its kaay 8D

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:iconmr-viet:
Oh my.. can you see the typo??
"Nothing else could taste this warm or feel this sweet."

It's suppose to be
"feel this warm or taste this sweet."

Hahaha wow I'm so senseless.

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:iconeminine:

You're welcome ^__^

Oh yeah, heh, I never noticed it x3
Though maybe you could have something taste warm... but not feel sweet ^^;
:iconmr-viet:
Hmm, feeling sweet is like. "ZOMG I R SO AWESOME".. Yea

Haha.

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Yeah, I guess you're right :D
:iconmr-viet:
Well they're other ways you can feel sweet, kind or.. the perverted type of way. >_<"

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Lol xD

Well, i guess, after all, you weren't exactly wrong then with your last two lines x3

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